tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post6447697377183620204..comments2024-03-09T13:37:25.310-08:00Comments on Meanderings of Melanie Sherman: First Sentence ContestMelanie Shermanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01385073936714563295noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-50514012177483501072010-06-30T13:43:36.028-07:002010-06-30T13:43:36.028-07:00K.M. Weiland,
Thanks. I'm going to enter a l...K.M. Weiland,<br /><br />Thanks. I'm going to enter a log-line contest and I think I'll use the first line, with a few words after it. Or not.Melanie Shermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01385073936714563295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-43647468791460798632010-06-30T12:37:25.357-07:002010-06-30T12:37:25.357-07:00Sounds like some scary cousins! It's a good fi...Sounds like some scary cousins! It's a good first line. Why someone's cousins (particularly if they're young cousins) would be threatening the hero's life is a question I'd want to find the answer to.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13832782604769370695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-64273265120571737662010-06-28T22:18:56.167-07:002010-06-28T22:18:56.167-07:00Well, Single, it is a closet, so to speak. And yo...Well, Single, it is a closet, so to speak. And you are right. They shouldn't be in there. :)Melanie Shermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01385073936714563295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-36094406731143499062010-06-28T22:07:55.712-07:002010-06-28T22:07:55.712-07:00MELANIE, GET OUT OF THE CLOSET ... NOWWWWWWWWWWWWW...MELANIE, GET OUT OF THE CLOSET ... NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! (sorry, that was the first thing that popped into my head...)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333759149933371283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-57754360865789516982010-06-28T16:21:30.094-07:002010-06-28T16:21:30.094-07:00Taffy,
Thanks, for the nice compliment and for st...Taffy,<br /><br />Thanks, for the nice compliment and for stopping by here.Melanie Shermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01385073936714563295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-54568996458420287262010-06-28T15:39:03.921-07:002010-06-28T15:39:03.921-07:00I like your first line too!
Thanks for popping ove...I like your first line too!<br />Thanks for popping over to my blog.Taffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796711977284429278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-47197272330387132682010-06-27T21:58:12.869-07:002010-06-27T21:58:12.869-07:00Elizabeth,
Thanks for stopping by. Mine has chan...Elizabeth,<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by. Mine has changed and changed and sometimes unchanged.Melanie Shermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01385073936714563295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-72559316246738650002010-06-27T21:44:00.293-07:002010-06-27T21:44:00.293-07:00Oooh, I love how you included your first line here...Oooh, I love how you included your first line here, great one!! Mine was a bit generic, but I changed it on my actual WIP. *sigh* ;)Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-16638955015605644952010-06-27T17:56:18.862-07:002010-06-27T17:56:18.862-07:00RaShelle,
Thanks for hosting such a fun contest.
...RaShelle,<br /><br />Thanks for hosting such a fun contest.<br /><br />Dale,<br /><br />Hmmmmmm.Melanie Shermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01385073936714563295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-83250382464666624912010-06-27T17:37:15.927-07:002010-06-27T17:37:15.927-07:00EEEK!EEEK!Dale Sherman Blodgethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05196292855147224681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4665945635718948308.post-5005761820087686902010-06-27T17:17:31.465-07:002010-06-27T17:17:31.465-07:00Hi Melanie. Love the pic! Thanks for the blog ment...Hi Melanie. Love the pic! Thanks for the blog mention. I appreciate it.=DRaShelle Workmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582252557500502186noreply@blogger.com