Thursday, January 2, 2014

Writing prompt #6--Create a first sentence in 15 words or less.

She listened at the door, breath caught, blood screaming in her ears.

No picture.  Just that first sentence.  That's it.


  1. The barrel of the gun was pointed at my face;his fingers squeezed the trigger.

  2. The glittery sleeping beauty costume was beautiful, but she wished she'd been the precious bluebird.

  3. That sounds like a great opening for a MG book, and you could do your own illustrations. It would be awesome.


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